Continuation...
Chap 5 training....ha! Dorian is def. Not normal, now if he could fly with those wings....
Chap 7 The Grey...I like this line "compassion is your undying trait"
"A compassionate Naermyth and a ruthless human. What a pair we'd make." ~Dorian
Chap 8 Salt...its a powerful tool against those naermyth. Funny moments of Dorian being whiny and a lot of sulking during training. Then with Dorian testing his Rumpilstilskin anomaly ability on Athena and River's dramatic reaction just so funny!
Chap. 9 TRUST (no i don't coz ur not there chappy nine)HONEST TO GOODNESS MY EFFING COPY HAS A PRINTING ERROR. THERE IS NO CHAPTER EFFING NINE IN IT. INSTEAD THE PAGES AFTER CHAP 8 WERE PAGES ABOUT CHAP 4. Then there is chapter 10. NA PAKAMALAS KO NAMAN O_o
(Somebody please tell me what that chapter is about I have a feeling the truth about dorian and the late mentor of Athena who is Benevidez is being revealed in this chapter.)
Chap 10 Travelling...just in case I forget to mention just how badass and kickass Aegis is as a shepherd? Coz she is channeling some resident evil herione to me.lol!
so far I really like how the world building in this one is shaping out.
Chap. 11 Lesson...hmmm an emotional enigma,sounds intriguing of what's the real connection all about bet. Aegis and Dorian.
Chap. 12 The Enemy...gesh Dorian you are turning out to be such a very curious and inquisitive creature not to mention very talkative as well.
I want to know more about this Valarao character!
OMFGAAAAAAAD that ending in this chapter!!! WTF!!! I knew there is a reason I don't like that SPONGE CAKE person in the beginning.
Chap. 13 Betrayal....Mamon you gave one of my fave snack a bad name xD I Will END you!!! Okaay that was a bit too much of a reaction .lol!
Chap.14 To Heaven or Hell....well I am mighty relieved they survived after that asassination attempt. That was not cool at all Kwago!!!
Chap. 15 Answers...well there were a lot of surprising revelations about the real nature of Dorian. dude a nephilim! And that Tito Bing sounds like an awesome mad eccentric historian/scientist...lol!
Chap. 16 The Divine...Dorian is officially a wing wight! Again tito bing is such a riot with an odd sense of humor. Have a mentioned he is a bit of a loco? Hahahaha! Love him though.
"I hope I'm not offending you. I could be very well be eating your fifth cousin. And I've got to say; he's delicious" ~tito bing
Chap. 17 Little Shepherd...a brother?????!!!!
- tito bing is enjoying his gory ride was hilarious!
- aaaaaahhhhhhhhh, BAKUNAWA! What a way to end this chapter
Chap. 18 Home...LOL a lot over tito bing's antics
so things are getting more exciting and riskier!
Chap. 19 Ruins...I knew it! I knew itM River does have a thing for Athena. I have to admit I got kilig over it. typical Athena is oblivious about it. and again one more time with feeling " I REALLY DON'T LIKE YOU MAMON" an effective villain though.
Chap. 20 The Sick...poor Nate! And River I adore you so!!!!
Chap. 21 Flight....AAhhhhhhhh!!! the KISS of Distraction! Nice one River whatever your reason for that one I just know you were dying to do that to your Dearest Athena for a long time.(hindi ba abvious na die hard romantic ako?hehehe)
Chap. 22 The Pink Room...what a sad childhood Athena
River...Bakit hindi ka crush ng crush mo? Hehehe, seriously poor guy Athena is in denial.
Dorian you are just too cute I wanna squish you like a teddy bear for acting like an over protective brother to Athena..hehehe.
Chap. 23 Discovery...hidden and secret experiments are coming to light about Fusion. The theory is not unique for me but it doesn't take away its intriguing aspects to the story.
Okay I have stopped half way in this chapter coz I'm sleepy na. So far I do like the writing style. It is not perfect but it is at par with most YA books I've read. although this one is not YA but an adult urban fantasy but it can easily be in the YA if the characters were a lot younger. I have read many YA books with similar plot story but the lore the writer used in this one is distinctive to our native country that it feels fresh to me
Now if only the author let them travel way south like in Cebu, I'm sure we have some anting2x here that will help the shepherds fight the war against these Naermyth..lol! Let them eat our famous lechon!