deathwalker wrote:My advice:
1. Please, no more vampires...
2. Avoid making a macho + super-cool + alpha character by garnishing his dialogues. Like "Gatorade is for pussies!" (I am Number Four). Make his actions speak for his character, not his annoying punchlines and one liners.
3. A negative feedback is always the best "stepping stone." Revise, edit, reinvent.
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